->Arrow

You made me do that thing where I can't read and breathe at the same time and somehow breathing seems unimportant.

I assumed from the outset that they were failing to understand each other and hoped that there would be a hot and happy ending, but not switching to Ray POV maintained enough doubt to make me anxious.

Possibly my favourite thing of all is the language; there's precision and word choices that make it truly Fraser without coming even close to caricature, and the lovely flow and rhythm has the effect (like Nos's writing) of making me want to read it aloud.