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One of my New Year's Resolutions was to actually leave comments on fics I really enjoy, even when I'm shy and don't even know the authour...although, having read and adored many of your Fraser/RayK fics, I guess I do know you a little, at least as a writer.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this piece because you painted this sublime angst of miscommunication which felt very organic...haven't we all been there, to various extents...and then you resolved it so well, by which I mean the drastic change in tone of the intimacy, the intensity of the intimacy once that "pesky" miscommunication was dealt with, was just so effective, and so deliciously vivid. Oh, and really HOT, too. ;)

As to voices and characterisation, spot on there as well. I really enjoyed Fraser's moments of solitude with Shelley, his voice and his reading of those passages was almost like a bonus edumacashun. (And I can picture it, too, aurally or visually or whatever that would be if Fraser were to read some Shelley.)