ext_4071 ([identity profile] laurie-ky.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] arrow00 2007-10-03 01:54 am (UTC)

Wow! so good a read on so many levels. The dialoug. The pattern of their voices. Blair needing to meditate and Jim deciding to fuck it and head out for consolation sex.. Blair seeing the big picture and Jim focusing on the details. Messy sex. Emotional vulnerability. Second thoughts and second chances.

Really, very, very well done but my favorite part -- Jim casting a yearning glance at the stained couch and his impulse to delay sex until he can clean it up. So Jim to me.
Laurie

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