I love this - so hot, angsty and in character. You have such a good rhythm for their dialogue and internal voices. And you get just the perfect post-coital Blair moment in:
"..you can't just ditch me now and go back to the Fortress of fucking Solitude to hang up your goddamned cape."
Jim couldn't help it—he started laughing again. It was the accompanying hand-gestures that did him in.
no subject
I love this - so hot, angsty and in character. You have such a good rhythm for their dialogue and internal voices. And you get just the perfect post-coital Blair moment in:
"..you can't just ditch me now and go back to the Fortress of fucking Solitude to hang up your goddamned cape."
Jim couldn't help it—he started laughing again. It was the accompanying hand-gestures that did him in.
Brilliant. Thank you!