oh my god! i haven't come across such a satisfying (in every single way) story in a while..
the subtle differences between the things that Fraser "doesn't" say or "cannot" say.. wow.. your way with words is just so masterful..
i also love the perfect balance of uncertainty and impulsiveness you struck with your description of Ray in this story, such as "pouncing" and the "force of Ray's personality"..
How to get Ray to let him?
and i love how you just *get* Fraser's language down pat.. i haven't read about any other character who thinks in terms of "getting someone to LET him love that someone".. it's just so unique..
there are so many good things from this story, i can't quote them all in a comment, but i want to let you know how much i love this beautiful piece.. thank you so much for sharing the gem! ♥
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the subtle differences between the things that Fraser "doesn't" say or "cannot" say.. wow.. your way with words is just so masterful..
i also love the perfect balance of uncertainty and impulsiveness you struck with your description of Ray in this story, such as "pouncing" and the "force of Ray's personality"..
How to get Ray to let him?
and i love how you just *get* Fraser's language down pat.. i haven't read about any other character who thinks in terms of "getting someone to LET him love that someone".. it's just so unique..
there are so many good things from this story, i can't quote them all in a comment, but i want to let you know how much i love this beautiful piece.. thank you so much for sharing the gem!
♥