ext_6156 ([identity profile] j-s-cavalcante.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] arrow00 2007-05-08 12:40 am (UTC)

Oh. Wow. So beautiful! And HOT. I love Inexperienced!Fraser and Gentle!Persistent!Ray. Lovely structure. There are so many things Fraser doesn't say, all the time. I love Ray's ease with his body and what he wants. The scene with Huey and Dewey was terrific. Ray didn't give himself away to them at all, but he got Dewey to knock off the homophobic comments and neatly conveyed his (Ray's) interest to Fraser at the same time. He's so mature and still so Ray. Which is to say, I'm just as impressed with your Ray as I am with your Fraser, and together they are greatness!

We are so lucky you are writing in this fandom!

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