Wonderful story :D You really seemed to capture Fraser and Ray. I thought the donut postcard was a nice touch, without being too sappy.

I really liked how you captured the passage of all those years that Fraser and Ray had been apart. Feeling a queer sense of freedom, I smile back at him, at the Ray of yesterday and today. We've come so far from there to here. It's been a long road, and an ugly one, but having him here now, being together once more, I suddenly feel quite young again.

'bovine semen story is ABSOLUTELY TRUE to every detail. ' Wow! you learn something new everyday.