F/K Snippet: Pavlov's Bell (R)

[arrow00]

Title: Pavlov's Bell
Author: arrow00
Fandom: dS
Pairing: F/K
Rating: R
Prompt: "Pavlov"
Length: 300 words
Notes: [x-post] For ds_snippets amnesty challenge 12


Pavlov's Bell

by Arrow


It used to bug the shit out of Ray how all it took was that bird-dog straightening of Fraser's spine, or even just a low, urgent, "Ray," and automatically Ray's heart would start pumping juice and there he'd be, running after Fraser to dive through a wall of fire or climb a rope onto a hot-air balloon or jump off a roof into Lake Fucking Michigan. He was trained. Totally whipped, but he wasn't even getting any. And it bugged him he didn't seem to have the same hook into Fraser—had to practically beg the guy to turn left instead of right.

But that was Before. B.F.F., or Before Fucking Fraser.

A.F.F., Ray found out he could just give the sign and Fraser would be there. All Ray had to do was lick his lip, or jut out his hip and cup his dick, and like ringing a bell there was Fraser on his knees—on his fucking knees—pulling down Ray's fly or even bending over for him. Which Fraser did, frequently, usually with this confused look on his face like he didn't quite understand why he was doing it.

And Ray needed that, needed Fraser to feel how that was, because Ray had been living with that feeling since the day he'd met the guy, and even though things usually turned out all right, Ray was giving up a hell of a lot just on faith. Fraser had to have the same faith in him, and what better way to show it than by going down on all fours and begging for Ray's cock?

It was like Fraser had this one area it was okay to let go in, and just one person he would let go for, and that one person was Ray.

And that suited Ray just fine.

Comments

[vsee.livejournal.com]

Oh. Yeah. That works. Mmmmm. Thinky and hot, and makes sense out of that dynamic that I sometimes have trouble making sense of. I love Fraser's giving in...it's sexy, and it works.

[akamine_chan]

It was like Fraser had this one area it was okay to let go in, and just one person he would let go for, and that one person was Ray.

Oh, this was very nice.

Fraser needs Ray so much, needs him to be that one person to let go for. Needs someone to trust.

Very, very nice, arrow. Thank you for sharing.

[janedavitt.livejournal.com]

I can see how the inequity would really bug Ray. Nice way to redress it ;-)

[capt-spork.livejournal.com]

BFF and AFF have me cracking up.

Nice!

[luzula]

Oh, I love the bird-dog straightening of his spine--my parents had an Irish setter, so it really brings out a visual for me.

And nice way to adress the trust issues between them. (Also, hot.)

[thornnuminous.livejournal.com]

I totally get this. Great job.

[thayln.livejournal.com]

Yay, passion! \o/

Love the image of Fraser going up like flash paper from just a look. The more repressed they are, the harder they fall. LOL

[viciouscats.livejournal.com]

Mmmmmmmmmm, abbreviations! :)

[nos4a2no9.livejournal.com]

Oh, arrow00, I say this every time, but this was really, really terrific. It provides so much character insight and hotness and such good, old-fashioned writing ability. I love the way you've explore that issue of control, and shown us how much Fraser loves and trusts Ray. You've really illustrated that point you made below to vsee: these guys are two halves of a whole. They're equals, and Ray provides solace and release for Fraser in a way no one else does. That's a beautiful thought, and you craft it in such a compelling and beautiful way. I really enjoyed this short piece, and yes, wow, with the hot. You are on fire lately!

[vickitub.livejournal.com]

Short and sweet and beautifully written.