ext_1595 ([identity profile] bibliokat.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] arrow00 2008-07-16 07:28 am (UTC)

Eeeeee, I love it! Learning new things is fun;)

Hope you don't mind, I spotted a teeny typo:
"Take of your shirt," Fraser said instead, his voice ridiculously husky, and Ray grinned and tried to yank it over his head.

Thanks for fic sharing!

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