How is it you write exactly what I want to read? I've never quite understood the urge to tell another fangirl "I want to have your little fannish babies," (and I think most of the girls who say it have never actually been pregnant, because they would not make such a blithe statement if they had, or at least if they hated being pregnant as much as I do)--but I understand now! :)
This is just...so perfectly what I love to read. It's not even the tying-up kink that does it for me; it's not an especial kink of mine, either way. Kinky stuff just doesn't turn my crank unless you count threesomes, but that's not kinky, right? That's just hot. :)
On the other hand, the "being tied up by the bad guys and accidentally getting turned on" trope does...so maybe...maybe what "kinky" means to most of us is "something that I think is weird that turns other people on, but not me, because what I like isn't kinky, it's just normal and hot." :)
In any event, this scenario is one I adore, and Ray's coming against Fraser's face in the middle of it was just about one of the hottest and most blushworthy moments in fanfic that I can recall reading, and jeez, I must have the humiliation kink, too, because that is massively, massively entertaining to me, that Ray had to go through that. Well...I mean since I knew it was going to turn out well for him, I guess.
I dunno what I'm trying to say here except that I read through this in a kind of dazed amazement that anyone in fandom would produce something that just fit so well what I want to read!
So, you totally rock, and this is superbly written to boot, and I loved many, many of the details as well (like all of them), including: the Mario brothers! ROFL! And Ray's flexible like you wouldn't believe, and OMG Lucky Charms in the second sex scene in two weeks? Made of win! Love the Ray voice!
And, God, the "Ray, don't"--heartbreaking, especially when you go back and reread it in light of what Fraser really must have been feeling, adoring Ray, wanting him, and yet thinking this was Ray just rubbing off on him like a dog, or something. Ouch!
And Ray being brave enough to insist they talk about it and Ray having to clue him in, and ohmygod the love scene, and the things Fraser said to him...and Fraser projecting his own kink onto Ray, and...
there is simply nothing not to love about this piece. Except that I hate the term "chubby" used for erection? That is seriously the only thing I am not totally, 100% in love with here, and it's utterly unimportant.
You nailed both characters here, no pun intended, so perfectly. Fraser landscaping the backyard with his neighbors, and the doggy door and the coffee and the barking at Dief! and how he gets cold when he's mad, and, God, telling Ray he's a man of the world! (Yeah: Mars.)
And with the lanyard and the nipples and the hothothot and it's a good thing these guys didn't have intercourse in this story, because I would have spontaneously combusted.
And most of all there is this:
So I know I have to lay it all out, put it all on the line. What else is new, when it comes to him? I mean, when the fuck did he ever take less than everything I could give in a situation?
It's one of the reasons I goddamn love him.
Which is utterly brilliant and perfect and in spite of all the hotness is the best thing in the entire story.
So, just...I adore you and I want to have your little fannish babies. :)
Noticed a typo you might want to fix: I know were I'm coming from. You wanted "where."
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How is it you write exactly what I want to read? I've never quite understood the urge to tell another fangirl "I want to have your little fannish babies," (and I think most of the girls who say it have never actually been pregnant, because they would not make such a blithe statement if they had, or at least if they hated being pregnant as much as I do)--but I understand now! :)
This is just...so perfectly what I love to read. It's not even the tying-up kink that does it for me; it's not an especial kink of mine, either way. Kinky stuff just doesn't turn my crank unless you count threesomes, but that's not kinky, right? That's just hot. :)
On the other hand, the "being tied up by the bad guys and accidentally getting turned on" trope does...so maybe...maybe what "kinky" means to most of us is "something that I think is weird that turns other people on, but not me, because what I like isn't kinky, it's just normal and hot." :)
In any event, this scenario is one I adore, and Ray's coming against Fraser's face in the middle of it was just about one of the hottest and most blushworthy moments in fanfic that I can recall reading, and jeez, I must have the humiliation kink, too, because that is massively, massively entertaining to me, that Ray had to go through that. Well...I mean since I knew it was going to turn out well for him, I guess.
I dunno what I'm trying to say here except that I read through this in a kind of dazed amazement that anyone in fandom would produce something that just fit so well what I want to read!
So, you totally rock, and this is superbly written to boot, and I loved many, many of the details as well (like all of them), including: the Mario brothers! ROFL! And Ray's flexible like you wouldn't believe, and OMG Lucky Charms in the second sex scene in two weeks? Made of win! Love the Ray voice!
And, God, the "Ray, don't"--heartbreaking, especially when you go back and reread it in light of what Fraser really must have been feeling, adoring Ray, wanting him, and yet thinking this was Ray just rubbing off on him like a dog, or something. Ouch!
And Ray being brave enough to insist they talk about it and Ray having to clue him in, and ohmygod the love scene, and the things Fraser said to him...and Fraser projecting his own kink onto Ray, and...
there is simply nothing not to love about this piece. Except that I hate the term "chubby" used for erection? That is seriously the only thing I am not totally, 100% in love with here, and it's utterly unimportant.
You nailed both characters here, no pun intended, so perfectly. Fraser landscaping the backyard with his neighbors, and the doggy door and the coffee and the barking at Dief! and how he gets cold when he's mad, and, God, telling Ray he's a man of the world! (Yeah: Mars.)
And with the lanyard and the nipples and the hothothot and it's a good thing these guys didn't have intercourse in this story, because I would have spontaneously combusted.
And most of all there is this:
So I know I have to lay it all out, put it all on the line. What else is new, when it comes to him? I mean, when the fuck did he ever take less than everything I could give in a situation?
It's one of the reasons I goddamn love him.
Which is utterly brilliant and perfect and in spite of all the hotness is the best thing in the entire story.
So, just...I adore you and I want to have your little fannish babies. :)
Noticed a typo you might want to fix: I know were I'm coming from. You wanted "where."