plotbunniofdoom: (f/k: hug)
Jo ([personal profile] plotbunniofdoom) wrote in [personal profile] arrow00 2009-06-09 11:58 pm (UTC)

*G*

"I've never...had...a bath quite like this before," he said, panting.

"Then you've been missing out, buddy," Ray said. "Later I'll show you my rubber ducky."


Such a great fic! I love the conversation between them, you write it really well. The image of them popping back into their old roles after the adventure but missing something is such a great one! And I love the idea of Fraser overheating and blurting out his feelings - it fits his character so well.

Such a good Ray voice too. Loved this!

&hearts

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