Date: 2007-08-21 09:08 pm (UTC)
ext_14817: (Yeah you - Ray K)
That's just fantastic. Dreamy and urgent all at the same time. Strangely perhaps, I also like that you went for a less obvious weapon. And poor Ray, I can just imagine his panic, how sharp everything must have been to him while Fraser was swaddled in confusion. And like others have said, it's a real skill or convey everything that happening clearly with a compromised narrator. Bravo!
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