Date: 2008-02-21 11:51 am (UTC)
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And what I meant to say was that even though I assumed (for reasons external to the text) that you were withholding Ray's POV in order to create tension/angst, that didn't make the piece less effective for me. What happened is that I had the Fraser POV that you provided and the Ray POV my brain was generating running in parallel as I read. That is an effect I particularly enjoy.
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