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Date: 2008-03-12 02:34 am (UTC)Your writing here is so strong and confident and lyrically beautiful: you have such a gift for Fraser-POV narration, and you use that to full effect in wise yet somehow lighthearted meditations on growing older and succumbing to the frailties of age.
I love the odd, awkward, painful sequences of healing here, and the way that theme (healing an old wound and a new injury, healing a breach that should never have existed in the first place) is so fully realized. You've done such a terrific job of articulating the point that, yes Virginia, things do get better. It's a simple but effective plot: Fraser almost gives up but with Ray's help and affection he pulls through, and together they win their love. There's a message there, one of hope and comfort and optimism. And it resonants powerfully. Beautifully done.