Date: 2008-09-28 03:04 pm (UTC)
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I love all your stories and this one is no exception. It is a warm fuzzy and made me smile.

I love how Ray, high and confused, essentially asks for an Inuit story about plate tectonics. I love how Fraser is trying so hard to be calm and soothing, but Ray can still hear the panic underneath. I love how Fraser knows he can't hide his panic from Ray and as Ray's condition worsens, Fraser abandons the effort and lets his fear show. I love that back at Ray's apartment, Ray notices immediately that Fraser is sitting too close, but it's okay, because Fraser has potato chips.

Now what would really be cool, is if we could see this story from Fraser's POV.

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