->Arrow

It's so nice to see new F/V writers coming along - and this is lovely. It has a "canony" feel, particularly with Fraser's little "still", and the voices are very good. I also liked that you took your time with where they were going at the end. It's sometimes tempting to rush into things in fanfic, and frankly, without the kiss, this could be straight (no pun intended) canon!

I hope to see more.