->Arrow

This story is sweet, and Fraser's cherry stem trick to me is mostly cute, since it seems, as Ray points out, a little dated and girly (which is why it is so *charming*). But you really got to me in some other points in the story with the hotness.

the line of his jaw calls to Fraser maddeningly, hourly, that he needs to put his mouth there and feel the short, golden stubble sanding his lips raw.

Oh, excellent. I love the detail, sensuous but not altogether *pleasant*, which strikes me as a Fraser-ish view.

That he needs Ray to fuck him. (Fuck. Fuck. Fuck.)

Thank you for the reminder that Fraser is a guy, even when he's himself. Hot.

The rub of Ray's hairy thigh drives Fraser to madness, and he strokes himself against it, squirms, thrusts, gasps and, in short order, releases, groaning with pleasure and shame. Ray is laughing, short huffs of delight, and caressing Fraser's sides with his hard hands.

This short section is really fresh, and the direct, crisp language gives it a lot of bite. So very GUH.

Fun story.